Posts : 7 Points : 0 Join date : 2008-01-24 Age : 33
Subject: NEW SONG!! the girl i knew Sun Jan 27, 2008 2:12 pm
please comment on what u think
verse 1: i look in the mirror and i dont recognise the girl staring back this girl use to be one of the nicest girls i knew she always helped out her friends she use to respect herself she use to try hard at school
chorus: she has brown hair green eyes she is 5'5 so many things have happened now she is a changed person she is throwing her life away when she has so much potential to do well she's throwing her dreams verse 2: i look at her now she gets into fights she has done drugs she is in trouble with the law this is the person who she doesn't wanna be shes in too deep and doesn't no how to get out she tries but something always seems to pull her down
chorus
verse 3: she compares the two knowing who she wants to be she's pushed her true friends away she has no one she feels so alone she doesn't have anyone to talk to she wants to turn her life around but she doesn't no how
chorus
The Late MC__Matty Vanilla Ice
Posts : 7 Points : 0 Join date : 2008-01-24 Age : 33 Location : Liverpool
Subject: Re: NEW SONG!! the girl i knew Sun Jan 27, 2008 2:34 pm
looks good bonni
like the chorus especially
J-ILL aka Mario
Posts : 4 Points : 0 Join date : 2008-01-29 Age : 38 Location : Batemans Bay
Subject: yo Tue Jan 29, 2008 12:16 pm
heartfelt stuff Bonn
dominic Admin
Posts : 89 Points : 72 Join date : 2007-11-05
Subject: Re: NEW SONG!! the girl i knew Tue Jan 29, 2008 1:26 pm
Great song bon bon
have you put it to music yet?
I started putting the track list together for the album today...so keep writing those songs:)
Any one else writing songs lately, wrote one tonight...about being mmad.....