something of a song i wrote this week

(This is just a phrase or two of a song i'm working on.... here goes)

as i look in your eyes
and see what i long to be
as i look in your eyes
the world comes home to me

(chorus:)

Trust in me
believe in me
when you thought the world has gone
i was with you all along

i'll take your hand
i'll set you free
i'll be your wings
you'll be my breeze

I'll let you soar
i won't let you fall

I will never let you go...
i love you.


THE END............( that's all i got so far)

CHEERS

woah thats rad.

and the 'look into your eyes' part
do you know what part it is/will be
is it a verse
or is it like a build up thing to the chorus?
cause that would be sooo cool.

i like it because its a song that sounds meaninful and stuff
but its not depressing.
and so many songs are depressing
but its also not too cliche either.

in short: this song is radd, i like it!

I WANNA HEAR IT!!!!! Almost crying...
How are you Keanu? Missin ya, Mr!

sounds amazing dude!